Monday, 27 April 2009
Friday, 3 April 2009
Draft Final cut
Evaluation

We decided to have a quick killing, as it is something that happens a lot in slasher films such as Scream.There is also an aspect of sexual tension/references. For example, in Halloween when Micheal Myers sees his sister in her underwear. This was also included in our production when you see the protagonist in bed with another man. The protagonist has to hold the duvet across her chest to give the illusion she is naked, you can also see the mans bare chest. We decided to do this as the sexual characters in films are typically the ones which are killed first. These strong sexual references also appeal to the target audience which is a youth audience.
We decided the location of the house should be in a middle class area with a large detached house. This is what is expected in the slasher genre as it gives the illusion the no neighbours or passers by can hear the action or anybody scream.
We stuck to these common codes and conventions as we didn't want to confuse the audience to which genre the film was. We could have made the film more original as we used lots of inter-textual references but even if we planned not to use inter-textual references this would have been virtually impossible from the amount of horror films there is. Therefore we used the post-modernism idea that all media products are recycled to create new ones.
In our film we have mainly focused on one social group which is a ‘youth’ audience as all the characters are of a youth age (17-20). We decided to target a youth audience because we are youths ourselves, so we know what factors youths enjoy watching in the media. We decided to have the main protagonist a brunette to give the impression to the audience that she wont die as its usually blonde characters which are killed first. We also did this to stop the audience from being bored and sick of seeing the same stereotypes. We thought a brunette character might also bring in an ABC1 audience by a brunette protagonist as its going against the stereotypical blonde character which is typically seen in horrors. The protagonist represents typical females as she is interested in fashion by what she's wearing and takes care with the way she looks. An ABC1 audience is also brought in by the location of the house. We chose to have Will, the character who the protagonist is cheating on, because he is older then Mandy and Matt (shown by his hairy chest) therefore younger audiences may aspire to be like him as he is moral by telling Mandy he wants to end there affair. We decided to delete the school scene where Mandy dumps Theo as it wasn’t creating the right impression to the audience as some people found his character humorous when we wanted them to find him ’cute’ and ’geeky’.
We had initially chose to have his character portrayed that way to bring in the pink pound audience even though it is know deleted, the pink pound audience may like just as much seeing Will topless.

Our media product also represents Northern England, signified by the accents, and when Mandy is caught cheating on the antagonist, when she is leaning against the window sill you can see out of the window which is fields. Stereotypically, characters in Northern films are portrayed as being Working class, thick and common (through aspects of nudity). Our film doesn’t fit with the majority of Northern films such as Full Monty (Pete Cattaneo, 1997) and This is England (Shane Meadows, 2006) due to the middle class location. We decided not to exaggerate the Yorkshire setting, even though it may have worked in our favour with our potential Yorkshire audience, as we have noticed in other slasher films that the State (as they are normally set in America) of the film is not an important factor as it is typically just a town in America. We did this because we didn’t want this to harm our potential prospects with a national or international audience or go against typically codes and conventions.
Although, This is England only featured northern characters and focused on the mass unemployment in the north of England, it still was highly received at the international film festival. Our primary target audience for our film would be teenage boys as there are 2 character personality types in our film which they can relate to. The prop of the knife was used as it helps bring in a male audience as it is seen like a phallic object. Also, boys tend to dominate horror films.
Even though our film has a narrow representation, it doesn't mean film wont have a wide appeal across a socio-economic spectrum.
The type of distributor that would distribute our film would be a small budget company because we are unknown and it is our first production. They should also have previously distributed horror's before so they know advertising techniques etc. Production companies such as, Warp x as they did Donkey punch which is similar to our film. Warp x also focuses on producing and distributing British films. ‘Screen Yorkshire’ May also distribute our film as it normally funds regional films. It would then be likely for it to get shown at ‘Leeds young people’s film festival’. Studio Canal is another option we could use as they typically distribute British films.
“This year's festival will present the very best new and unseen films made for and by young people from all corners of the globe. A range of free hands-on workshops and master classes will also enable young people to find out more about film making and the industry.”
www.yorkshireeveningpost.co.uk/features/The-Knowledge-Young-People39s-Film.5117219.jp



During the micro-drama we didn’t use a storyboard or screenplay or production plan and to then use one in the film opening showed us how much easier and quicker it is then to make it up on the spot. I have also learnt how to use the camcorders. I feel I have progressed in filming point of view shots as there was a tricky sequence in our film where it was a point of view shot of me walking up the stairs. We had to re film this a number of times as the camera was to shaky but in our final piece its not very shaky and you can tell its supposed to be someone walking up the stairs. Although, a steadi cam, like the one used in Halloween, would have been a lot better to use.
During the filming process I felt I didn’t film as much as I would have liked to, due to the fact that I was the protagonist. But whenever I wasn’t in the shot I did film them scenes as shown in the production plan.
From doing the preliminary task I have learnt that planning is essential. In terms of location being adequate, the shots being set out and planned. Also, that ideas may seem good in your head but when you come to try set it out and plan filming it, it is to confusing.

Deconstruction of media film:
The establishing shot is of a tap being turned on then followed by a knife being placed down. This is the set up for the fake suicide.
You see a mans hand writing “I’m sorry” on the mirror in lipstick. This automatically gives a narrative enigma to the audience as they wonder what he’s done and what he’s going to do. ( Although there is one spelling mistake here as he writes “im sorry” not “I’m sorry” but this was only realized after we had filmed and edited so had no time to re-film)
It then goes to a flashback, shown by being in black and white, of someone walking into a room and seeing a boy and girl kissing in bed with the illusion that there naked. The girl then leaps up and says “Oh my god Matt, I thought you where going to call first?” This dialogue shows she knows who the man is but the audience doesn’t see him. “I thought you where going to call first?” shows how she doesn’t really care that she’s hurt him. We decided to use a point of view shot here as it looks like this is an insight to his memory and how he recalls things.
We then decided there to be a cut here as this is supposed to be where Matt leaves the room but the conversation still carries on.
We used shot-reverse-shot to show the dialogue between the 2 characters and because it is a common code of convention. Will then says “I didn’t know you had a boyfriend” which is anchorage to the audience that the protagonist has been caught cheating on her boyfriend. Her reply gives more exposition to how she really doesn’t care about her boyfriends feelings. The way that she is getting dressed in front of him shows how she is sexually available. We then used the 180 degree rule to show the conversation between the 2 characters. We used inter cutting of scenes as it is similar to The Warriors, it helps get the film straight into the action and introduce the protagonist and antagonist.
There is then a shot of someone going through a handbag and finding condoms, again exaggerating the fact that the protagonist is sexually available, and finding the lipstick.
The flashback has then ended and there’s a tracking shot of the protagonist walking down her street and into her house. We used jump cuts here as its more fast pace editing which appeals to a youth audience.
Then as the protagonist walks through the door we should have used a variety of shots to emphasis the door was already open.
The protagonist is then knocked out with a baseball bat and dragged to the bathroom and placed in the bath. In hindsight, it would have been better to see some pieces of clothing being removed.
We shot the slitting the wrists scene from a variety of angles to create tension. The protagonist is then left in the bath, while the antagonist leaves and as he walks past the camera, smiles as if to say he’s done nothing wrong.
There is then a picture of the protagonist and antagonist together, which shows the audience that they were in a relationship and it was him who caught her cheating on him.
Thursday, 2 April 2009
Group Scenario
Cinematography and Editing.


There is then a mid shot of the protagonist walking into the bathroom to be able to fit the setting and character into the frame. The camera the pans around the bathroom to show the audience this is the bathroom they first 3 clips are from.
There is another mid shot as the protagonist and antagonist walk down the corridor, again jump cutting is used to add tension. Then when the protagonist is on the floor, there is a birds eye view shot of her to show her vulnerability. The camera then tracks her as she is being dragged back to the bathroom. A high shot is then used over the antagonists shoulder to be able to see the action. Then as the antagonist leaves the room the camera tracks him.
We added a slow mo effect, transitions and fades to create a sense that some of the footage was supposed to be previous to the rest of the film or flashbacks. This is an inter-textual reference to the ring. We also used inter- cutting as it is used in The Warriors and this creates a sense of fast pace movement.

We composed the sound for our film on garage band which is an application from the Mac computers. We decided it would be a better idea than using copy right free music as it then fits more with the narrative of the film.

Audience feedback

Wednesday, 1 April 2009
Sound and Music
http://www.creativecommons.org.audio/
http://www.ccmixter.org/
http://www.copyleft-music.com/
http://www.audiojungle.net/
http://www.on-holdmusic.co.uk/

During the filming process there are some scenes we had to film again due to sound. Such as when the camera was too far away in one of the school scenes. We wouldn't have had to re film if we had a boom mic but as we don't, re filming was essential. We could have dubbed over, but as we weren't used to this process we thought the best idea was to re film.
Locations, Mise-en-scene, costume, props


The 2 main props we used were a baseball bat, used to knock out the protagonist, and a knife. The knife was chosen as it’s a ‘phallic’ object and has inter-textual references to ‘I know what you did last summer’.


These are photos from the bedroom scene. We chose this room as the duvet and walls are white signifying pure which in contrast it was there opposite as the protagonist is cheating on the antagonist in the bed.
Overall, the locations we chose were good locations as they were easy to film in. We did encounter problems with the props though. As obviously we couldnt see the protagonist being hit over the head with a baseball bat so it was difficult to film it without actaully hitting her whilst looking realistic. We then decided to this footage off screen but we didn't see this as a problem as it has been used in other films such as Halloween.
Hardware
Features of this camera are:

Canon 36x Advanced Zoom
True Wide High Resolution 16:9
Instant shooting with Quick Start
Microphone input connection
Joystick interface for easy control
DIGIC DV for true-to-life colours
LCD video light
Easy Mode and Program AE modes
Software

Tuesday, 31 March 2009
Rough Cuts
Monday, 30 March 2009
Our groups initial ideas
We then changed our idea as it didnt fit into a specific genre and we would have struggled to fit it in to 2 minutes. Also, 3 cuts in a 2 minute opening would be to confusing to the audience.
Micro drama Narrative theory
The task was to create a micro-drama, a short fictional text of around 1 minute. To then be introduced to 4 key theories and to explore these theories then apply them to our own fictional narrative. The Theories are:
Propps character archetypes
Todorov's model of narrative structure
Levi-Strauss' Binary opposition concept
Barthes' narrative enigma idea
When we were filming this we weren't particularly focusing on camera angles and including these theories but they are still applied.
We used Propps character types in our media. Lucy was the villain, the hero was Lauren and the false hero was Sophie as she ran back to help Kristie just so she didn't get into trouble. Kristie was the victim.
Todorov's 5 part narrative formula consists of,
1. a state of equilibrium at the outset
2. a disruption of the equilibrium by some action (wanting to steal the phone)
3. a recognition that there has been a disruption. ( arguing)
4.an attempt to repair the disruption ( running back to help)
5.a reinstatement of the equilibrium (calling an ambulance)
There are binary opposistions between the 3 bullies and Kristie by the way there dressed, there actions and the way there speaking. We did this to make it clear to the audience who's on which side.
There is narrative enigma as you don't know if Kristie will survive and what will happen to the bullies for stabbing her.
Production plan

Logo
Casting

The main male protagonist in the school scene was chosen because he creates a binary opposition between himself and the female protagonist, Mandy. This is because the girl is pretty and 'cool' as she has a group of friends surrounding her and the guy is not as attractive and 'geeky' by what he is saying and his mannerisms, in contrast to the female who seems cold and not as interested in the fact there splitting up.
The antagonist was chosen because again, he is binary opposition to the other male and female as he is a lot taller and bigger then the other two characters. It conotes he is more powerful and strong, making the female look vulnerable.
The Protagonist and the Antagonist
Dead End Poster

Wednesday, 25 March 2009
Genre Research


Tuesday, 17 March 2009
Target audience and BBFC

Our production doesn't include any non-Caucasian characters, but if we did this would reinforce its appeal to a multi-ethnic audience . However, this does not mean our text only targets a narrow Caucasian audience as many other productions continue to sideline non-Caucasian talent and still are successful. Such as Donkey Punch is a successful british horror which just feature white characters.
Even-though Northern films struggle a lot at the box office we still decided to keep with the northern accents and settings as there isn't a lot of dialogue in the film anyway. However, there is advantages to using southern English characters and settings as it has an hegemonic status. Films such as Notting Hill, which is set in London, makes it accessible for a UK wide audience to relate to as its the capital of the country, therefore making it successful. Using northern England stereotypes could jeopardize the foreign sales as the southern England stereotype is normally the one given out to other countries. But there are successful Northern films which have overcome this such as Full Monty and This is England as the main themes in the films are accessible to all audiences. For example, the main theme in the Full Monty is unemployment, and the main theme in This is England is Thatcherism ( a prime minister which has been described as a dictator) Warp X and Redwave films chose such broad themes as everyone can associate to a time where they or there country has been unemployed or had a high unemployment rate, and the audience all know of a country which has had trouble due to the countries leader. After considering our options, we still decided to keep to keep our northern accents as we don't see it as a great problem. Also, if we had decided to use southern accents, then there would be the problem with sounding realistic etc.

Screenplay
Final Synopsis/The Pitch


Tuesday, 3 March 2009
Preliminary task

Problems we incurred were the first time we filmed it we accidently filmed it horizontally instead of vertically which meant it was the wrong way round, we then had to quickly film it again which made us have a shorter amount of time to edit. We also should have put the characters in school uniform as a polysemic meaning could have occurred because the uniform would be anchorage to it being set in a school. In normal clothes it isn't as obvious to where the setting is.
Friday, 27 February 2009
Codes and conventions
We researched numerous films, mainly horrors, from a range of eras and directors and watched the opening scenes to see how and what successful horror films had done in the first 2 minutes to help and give advice to our production.

Touch of evil (1957) Orson Welles
Establishing shot of close up of a bomb then tracking shot of a man running with the bomb.
Genre- thriller
Music- non diegetic with quick pace to add tension.
Narrative enigma to who the man is who had the bomb.
No anchorage to where film is set.
Jazz music becomes diegetic, over exaggerated and loud.
No cuts yet, one long shot.
'Stop' sign in English narrows down to where its set, Anchorage.
Focus changes from car to pedestrians.
Target audience- Men and female as they both feature and both attractive so has sexual appeal.
Jazz signifies older audience post teen.
Characters go off screen for a small time, unusual if you tracking characters.
Psycho (1960) Alfred Hitchcock
Titles are cross cutting signifies slasher.
Also signifies a-list star in film.
Either says a film by.. or Alfred Hitchcocks shows directors cut.
Production companies and producers name also on opening sequence.
Jerry Braickenheimer famous as a producer of action films, can buy box set of his films which is unusual for producer.
Music is called score.
2 shots dissolving on each other.
Trick or treat (1985) Ned Morehead
Narrative over the titles
Black screen white titles signifies cheap, low budget film.
Slight lower angle shot to make actor look fierce.
Heavy metal rockers, bare chest long hair, make up.
Dark voice follows our cultural expectations of scary.
Font - Sharp edge
Starring Ozzy Osbourne and Gene Simmons.
Target audience male more likely then female.
15-24
Books in background called Rock and Rock-on.
Studded belt and wristband, fake skull.
Judist Priest poster and Wasp, classic rock metal band.
Large speakers, audio and turntables.
School setting, anchorage.
Bride of Chuckie (1998) Ronnie Yu

String music to signify horror, clear anchorage conotes genre
Font, uneven letters suggests chaos.
Drum and guitars makes heartbeat beat faster leads to an alteration in your mood, audience feel tense.
Universal pictures present... associated with horror.
Producers name
Directors name
Sharp abrupt noise
Blue conotes supernatural and cold.
American flag signifies its a public building.
Dutch angled shows somethings not right.
Never have high hopes from police, never intervene never solve case always die.
Source of light from lightning.
Inter textual reference to Friday 13th with a hockey mask, links into post modernism.
Inter textual reference to Halloween mask worn by the Shape in Halloween.
Fast pace editing signifies target audience -15 to 24+
Depth of focus- Dutch angle.
Name dropping of sony erricson product placement.
False scare
Representation, using stereotypes or counter types like 2 opening sequences.
Leprechaun (1993) Mark Jones
Titles offer black background Incorporated in opening scene.
Misleading signifiers that its a fantasy which sounds like child leprechaun.
Celtic style writing.
Stereotypical Irish drunk.
Stereotypical Irish name O'Grady.
Trainspotting (1996) Danny Boyle
Young characters so reflects in target audience.
Represented as stereotypical drug addicts, poor house working class.
Women represented as counter types as not there for males gaze as drug taking.
Contrast song "lust for life" playing to actors actions.
Set in Edinburgh mise-en-scene to phone number 013 Edinburgh code.
Binary opposition to the outfits there wearing.
Social realism film, shaky camera fast pace editing suggest younger audience.
Cross over appeal by song as older songs appeal to older generation.
Only male characters named so male target audience.

28 days later (2002) Danny Boyle
20th century fox.
Documentary style.
Narrative enigma to what’s going on.
Animal liberation group.
Denoted it’s a laboratory by white coats and glasses.
Dutch angles and blue tinted lighting to signify something’s wrong.
Counter-type of woman, she opens the cage door over the man, braver then the men.
Piano music playing signifies horror.
Scream (1996) Wes Craven
Siren noise signifies danger.
White writing changes to red, signifies blood or danger.
Font changes.
Phone links straight into action, no titles.
Quick editing signifies young target audience.
The use of the phone in slasher films comes from ‘when a stranger calls’ 1978 inter-textual reference.
Sound of prison door shutting.
Long drawn out string notes, inter-textual reference to Psycho.
Sound of a heartbeat makes your own heartbeat beat irregularly .
Light flashes same speed as heartbeat sound.
Blonde and busty character, background out of focus so she’s the main character.
Narrative enigma to her and his identity.
Brings in Propp, he’s the villain, she’s the victim.
No exposition.
Close up to show emotion on her face, tracking shot makes you think she’s being followed.
Deep and sinister male voice, Basic stereotypes for male.
No curtains even though its dark, glass signifies vulnerability.
Pan across her face, Close up.
Swing is swinging by itself, supernatural.
Middle class, large detached house isolated.
Woman say’s her favorite horror film is Halloween, then picks up a knife inter-textual reference.
Freud, psychologist thinks a knife is a ‘phallic’ object.
Saying she doesn’t have a boyfriend shows she’s sexually available.
300 (2006) Zack Snyder
Smoke shows gritty era.
Warner brothers style changed to fit in with the film.
300 sign written with blood signifies death and danger.
Lightning signifies danger.
Skull denotes death.
Close up on baby to emphasis vulnerability and innocence.
Framing cuts of head, makes him seem like a monster.
Jarhead (2006) Sam Mendez
Blank screen, no titles voice over.
Talking of war signifies action.
Youth target audience 15-35 more male audience.
Opening shot close up of character hint of main protagonist, commutation test if no close up was used then protagonist wouldn’t have been noticed.
Conote from eye movement he is unsure about something.
Font like a type writer, connotes serious and formal. Also, looks like a documentary style.
Exposition of his father by saying he used to be in the army too.
Comic effect by whistling music over violent act.
Irobot (2004) Alex Proyas
No titles.
Water effect is futuristic, working with robots being futuristic.
The music gets louder and quicker to create tension.
A part of the story is explained, exposition.
Cuts to alarm clock, false awareness.
Target audience, 15-45 mainly males as full of action but Will Smith is a well known attractive actor so brings in sexual appeal. He has a positive representation of black males.
Hybrid genre, not fully explained.
Wakes up with a gun next to him, narrative enigma, is he a criminal, gangster or police man?
Equilibrium and disequilibrium conflict between Will Smith and Robots.
Sin City (2005) Frank Miller

Based on a graphic novel.
Red title signifies death and blood.
Well known actors.
Caricatures link to comic books.
The film is based on 4 stories of Millers work.
Complex- multi layered narrative.
Narrative enigma to why he killed, who are they?
Only the females dress and lipstick is in colour - red signifies violence and blood.
Inter-textual reference to Kill Bill and Saving private Ryan.
Shot in Black and white.
Music is piano, slow and calm you don’t expect something bad to happen.
Constant sound of police sirens in the background denotes there’s a lot of violence and crime in the city.
Gladiator (2000) Bradley Scott
Slow and quite sounds which signifies something bad will happen, music gets louder increases heartbeat.
Slow editing - older mature audience.
Woman speaking over the top over action signifies death and in his head.
Gold letters connotes class. This is also applied to the producers logo’s and Universal logo. Signifies genre of the film.
Russel Crowe creates cross over appeal to woman in a generally male targeted film.
Action on screen creates preferred reading of a action/war film.
‘Set in Germania’ creates exposition.
Dark blue world (2001) Jansverak
Dark screen links to title.
Text is in font of WW2 propaganda style.
Music ‘big band’ what was listened to in 1940’s and 50’s. Denotes set in past and creates cross-over appeal to a older audience.
Read tint creates polysemic meaning, romance or blood.
Wimbledon (2004) Richard LongCrane
Music is cheerful suggest’s rom-com genre.
Cross over appeal from rom-com as based on tennis players.
Pathetic fallacy as weather reflects mood of characters.
Product placement.
Follows male gaze theory by young actress, Kirsten Dunst.
High school musical 2 (2007) Kenny Ortega
Close up of school clock with over-exaggerated ticking sound.
Music links in with genre of film.
Sequel so already got large fan base.
Title of film gives anchorage to genre.
3 shots fade into each other.
Names of actors come up in white serif.
In obtrusive editing.
Not much exposition to story of film yet.
Accent provides anchorage for setting.
Skull in school classroom is inter-textual reference to hamlet.
Over sized clock emphasizes students are more interested in the time than there teacher.
Clock gets bigger shows time is important.

John Carpenters' Halloween (1978) John Carpenter
Opening music similar to exorcist.
Builds tension.
Slow zoom.
Serif font.
Characters names' link to other films.
Blue tinted lightning, conote something is wrong.
Hand held camera.
Verisimilitude- creates a sense of realism within diegetic world.
Friday the 13th (1980) Sean S. Cunningham
Slasher, sci-fi, comedy
Hybrid genre to appeal to a wider audience.
Inter-textual reference to WWF by moves used, and to Lara Croft by using 2 guns.
Aspect of post modernism.
The Warriors (1979) Walter Hill
Each character is individually introduced.
Repeated inter cutting, sense of movement.
Small conflicts between gang members.
Derogatory comments about women.
Anchorage by close up on train stops.
Inter cutting shows sense of fast pace editing, so reflects target audience.
Our research into film openings shows us that it is expected to see a number of cuts to give exposition to the location, characters and target audience. For example. The Warriors used close ups on train stops to give anchorage to the location of the film, the characters are all introduced individually, again giving exposition to the location from their accents. Their ages, genders and ethnicity reflect the target audience.
There are many parallels between the horror films i have researched these include Narrative enigma, Non-diegetic music and sexual tension.
There is always narrative enigma in the opening sequence, as the audience is unsure who the characters are and what their role in the film is. Narrative enigma is used to grab the audiences attention and get them engrossed in the film. This then makes the audience want to carry on watching in order to know more about the film, therefore answering the questions that the opening sequence has aroused.
In the majority of horror films, the non-diegetic music over the opening sequence is long drawn out notes, which adds too and creates suspense and tension. There is also a beat which mimicks the sound of a heartbeat, gradually getting faster. This then makes the audiences heartbeat beat in time, as a result also getting faster. This brings the audience into the film making them feel part of it. This subconsciously makes the audience feel tension as they feel part of the film, and therefore making them feel subject to the dangers that may befall the other characters in the horror film. For example, this occurs in the beginning of Scream just before Drew Barrymoore is on the phone. The non-diegetic music creates tension in this way. As it creates tension which signifies to the audience that a scary moment is about to occur, the audience having this knowledge, creates tension in itself.
Sexual references are also made in the opening sequences, for example in Scream when Drew Barrymoore is on the phone to the killer, there is flirting which coincides with the popcorn that's being made, as it's bubbling up. This represent the sexual tension building and the heating of the popcorn mirrors the heat the characters are feeling. In the opening sequence of Halloween, Micheal Myers walks in to his sisters room and kills her whilst she is topless just after she has had sex with her boyfriend. These are strong sexual references as they appeal to the target audience of the youth audience.
We noticed from The Warriors that they had used titles which were red therefore looking like blood. We thought this was a really good idea as it signifies to the audience that the film is a slasher genre. We decided to use this idea with our titles.

The writing we used for the Title saying Dead End was a sharp Serif font. We used this as it is similar to Halloween.
To decide on the title of the film we looked at other films and how they got there title. Sin city is a nickname for Vegas due to the various forms of adult entertainment. Halloween got it's name as everyone knows what Halloween is therefore its accessible and all audiences can relate to it. We decided on the title Dead End as it is predominantly filmed in a cul-de-sac and it links in the the narrative of the film as the protagonist comes to a dead end.